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L LYnn's avatar

Fucking hysterical! Bravo, well done! Admist the brilliance of incorporating over half of the prompts/sentences, I somehow think that this one would have fit somewhere --

In a cock pot, afloat at sea? Is that a cooking pot or a champagne chiller? Those are two completely different vibes. ...but def not complaining 😜

Thanks for the creativity and laughs

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The Starfire Codes's avatar

Hilarious! 🤣🤣🤣

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Jim Davidson's avatar

You thought reverse whale was strange, but now it's a reverse cow girl. 🤪🎇🎶

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The Starfire Codes's avatar

Hahahahahahaha!

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M Le Baron's avatar

10 Stars out of 9. I was rolling. The hapless and lusty McDongle is my favorite. His particular verbosity is just too good.

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The Starfire Codes's avatar

I agree. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Kristin's avatar

Wow! ? Happy New Year!

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The Starfire Codes's avatar

Dongle’s Embrace was an anonymous entry into my writing contest.

Here is a link to the contest. You should submit an entry!

https://www.starfirecodes.com/p/ill-take-sentences-i-never-thought-i-would-say

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The Brothers Krynn's avatar

Interesting reading, I'm not much of a guy for romance novels or stories, but this was well-written (funny too, love your comment 'her harlot's heart melting' hahaha). Also your ability to toy with the accents of the characters here is interesting, nice touch not all writers could pull this off.

I'll have to take some notes on some of these particular kind of details for my own serial novels. You've given plenty to think of as always Starfire Codes!

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The Starfire Codes's avatar

Dongle’s Embrace was an anonymous entry into my writing contest. Thank you, but I didn’t write it. I agree - it’s hilarious!! 🤣🤣🤣

Here is a link to the contest. You should submit an entry!

https://www.starfirecodes.com/p/ill-take-sentences-i-never-thought-i-would-say

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Dongle’s Embrace was an anonymous entry into my writing contest. Thank you, but I didn’t write it. I agree - it’s hilarious!! 🤣🤣🤣

Here is a link to the contest. You should submit an entry!

https://www.starfirecodes.com/p/ill-take-sentences-i-never-thought-i-would-say

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The Starfire Codes's avatar

I don't mind if you all would like to bet on who it is, but the rule is that the Anon does not ever have to disclose. 🤣🤣

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Chris Youngblood's avatar

Rachel?

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